Dark White - Chapter 5 - Page 7

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Originally published December 8, 2015.

So I had to go back and fix this page. In my original script, Ramses names Vega by name. Declaring him his enemies. But reading back through my old pages, Ramses didn't actually hear Vega being called by name... Oops...

So I went back and I fixed it. Ramses putting the pieces of the puzzle together. He's unraveling the mystery, but he doesn't have Vega's name yet. I can still use that moment in a scene for later chapters.

But I like that this scene shows that Ramses's greatest weapon is his mind, and his determination.